10-18-2016, 05:07 AM
Is this about potato blight? It sounds like the country itself mourning over the state of the land, but then a narrator talking about the country, looks like you did this on purpose. And if potatoes have nothing to do with it, I can see how greed can be the cause for lament. The spiritual famine. It seems as though your primary focus was elaborating on the majestic scenery and deplorable state of affairs, which can only be aided by proper punctuation. I can feel what youre saying here I think because I love my country, and Ireland too, already. Anyways, I like it cause it's short and sweet
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