10-10-2016, 09:43 PM
You've put forth many interesting aspects. Religious context is safe in a dream because dreams are interpreted. If you think Jesus character is safe in heaven here I think you're the Jesus in your dream. So ending on fact or fiction I think spoils the rest. And more, the bulk of the story is being told through a nameless man, and youre the narrator, automatically including me, and that's how you got me to keep reading, because sentence structures need some concentrated effort. Dreams are really difficult to share, tending towards exhausting symbolism, but I think you're on a good track. Thanks for sharing!
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