Blood on the boards
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It all began (as most things do)
across the froth of Billy's brew
last Sunday;
a harmless joke about a friend
would somehow see the friendship end
by Monday.

A newbie's innocent remark
was all it took to turn things dark
and painful;
'twas meant to most sincerely praise
and yet it earned a bitter gaze,
disdainful.

Dale tried hard to calm the air
while milo flexed upon his chair,
all tautness.
"Leanne, I only said that you
write just like Maya Angelou!"
cried Thoughtless.

Drinks were downed and pens were out --
such a blow can't pass without 
reaction.
Todd joined in -- he knew the score --
soon the bar was lost to war
(abstraction)

Tom and Ella took up guard,
on the floor, the noob lay charred,
and cried:
"I take it back, your vengeful wrath
is reminiscent more of Plath,"
and died.
It could be worse
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Messages In This Thread
Blood on the boards - by Leanne - 10-03-2016, 07:52 AM
RE: Blood on the boards - by billy - 10-03-2016, 09:26 AM
RE: Blood on the boards - by just mercedes - 10-03-2016, 09:42 AM
RE: Blood on the boards - by Leanne - 10-03-2016, 09:49 AM
RE: Blood on the boards - by Achebe - 10-03-2016, 10:13 AM
RE: Blood on the boards - by CRNDLSM - 10-07-2016, 03:57 AM
RE: Blood on the boards - by Quixilated - 10-07-2016, 05:09 AM
RE: Blood on the boards - by Leanne - 10-07-2016, 05:39 AM



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