NaPM April 26 2016
#20
Interesting take on Labre, with some nice allusion to the cattle he cared for in his early life, and a rather cynical perspective on his death... there is much to like but I'm missing something and the disconnect is bothering me. I don't know the protagonist and I can't fit him into the tale. My failing, for which I'm sorry.
It could be worse
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NaPM April 26 2016 - by milo - 04-26-2016, 12:02 PM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by just mercedes - 04-26-2016, 01:51 PM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by REW - 04-27-2016, 09:08 AM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by Todd - 04-26-2016, 02:29 PM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by Achebe - 04-26-2016, 10:33 PM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by bedeep - 04-27-2016, 04:30 AM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by REW - 04-27-2016, 05:18 AM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by Keith - 04-27-2016, 06:24 AM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by Achebe - 04-27-2016, 06:45 AM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-27-2016, 07:23 AM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-27-2016, 10:52 AM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by billy - 04-27-2016, 04:01 PM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by QDeathstar - 04-28-2016, 09:41 AM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by Leanne - 04-30-2016, 05:40 AM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by RiverNotch - 04-30-2016, 12:51 PM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-30-2016, 05:42 AM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by RiverNotch - 05-03-2016, 10:19 PM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by Achebe - 05-03-2016, 10:50 PM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by CRNDLSM - 10-03-2016, 04:58 AM
RE: NaPM April 26 2016 - by Leanne - 10-03-2016, 07:04 AM



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