10-02-2016, 10:15 AM
To be entirely honest, my brain is far too exhausted right now (and the room seems to be spinning a bit) for me to actually work on new material. So here's an edit from an example I wrote for class a year ago.
There was an old man who would smoke-
a pipe he kept under his cloak.
When a car hit his leg
it cracked like an egg,
but now the old man doesn't smoke!
There was an old man who would smoke-
a pipe he kept under his cloak.
When a car hit his leg
it cracked like an egg,
but now the old man doesn't smoke!
If you're the smartest person in the room, you're in the wrong room.
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona