PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29
#17
I ended up going off-course. I absorbed the word list twice (I couldn't absorb it just once, I've recently been so hyped), then bam, shit rains. Here's the best I got, a somewhat tangential remark on the issue that so stung me:

It is no lamb but lambs that draw the cat
whose fearful symmetry strikes awful dread
even in our Lord's eyes -- as if your course,
aloof and distant from the flock, should grant
security. It is no lamb -- the tiger
spots then stalks then pounces at those alone
and by his sounds of feasting draws the flock
toward his fellow hunters. Times have changed:
as lions wait for death and falcons gyre,
tigers gather in flocks and lambs divide.
When shall God's fear revive the slouching pride?
When shall new verse thus well-considered mend
a nation's mind -- and ill-considered, lead
to overthrow of slaughter, haste, and greed?
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PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by rayheinrich - 09-29-2016, 05:44 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by just mercedes - 09-29-2016, 07:21 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by kolemath - 09-29-2016, 09:59 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by Keith - 09-30-2016, 04:46 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by kolemath - 09-30-2016, 01:13 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by Todd - 09-30-2016, 04:43 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by just mercedes - 09-30-2016, 06:29 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by Lizzie - 09-30-2016, 05:51 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by Lizzie - 09-30-2016, 12:05 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by Lizzie - 10-02-2016, 12:47 AM
Anno Domini 1076 - by dukealien - 09-30-2016, 06:11 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by Lizzie - 09-30-2016, 10:04 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by just mercedes - 09-30-2016, 10:45 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 08 - Sept. 29 - by RiverNotch - 09-30-2016, 11:14 PM



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