PWoF 2016 - Topic 07 - Sept. 28
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(09-29-2016, 10:22 AM)RiverNotch Wrote:  The Lie

It is said a tiger's stripes bleed through the skin, unlike a leopard's. Bared of cream, your pitted skin remains -- as if you've lost all shame. Each pit once meant each spark of love, but now only disdain. How could I love a woman who is so true to herself? How could a lion love a tiger, his mortal enemy?
I think you've got a good kernel of something here, River. I'd probably like it better as a good old fashioned poem, but I'd love to read more.
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PWoF 2016 - Topic 07 - Sept. 28 - by rayheinrich - 09-28-2016, 06:07 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 07 - Sept. 28 - by just mercedes - 09-28-2016, 06:36 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 07 - Sept. 28 - by just mercedes - 09-28-2016, 09:03 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 07 - Sept. 28 - by Achebe - 09-29-2016, 06:17 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 07 - Sept. 28 - by Keith - 09-29-2016, 04:40 AM
Confetti - by dukealien - 09-29-2016, 05:14 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 07 - Sept. 28 - by just mercedes - 09-29-2016, 07:03 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 07 - Sept. 28 - by kolemath - 09-29-2016, 09:30 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 07 - Sept. 28 - by Lizzie - 09-30-2016, 11:43 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 07 - Sept. 28 - by Lizzie - 09-29-2016, 11:06 AM



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