ice is ice ver 0.001 RN, CRNDLSM
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sodium acetate?

i would remember the general significance of the term -- rather, the moment in which its signifiance was duly impressed upon me -- but even its surface meaning eludes me, perhaps because of the above. somehow, the separation of 'will do' feels unnecessary, although missing this memory i cannot be sure -- what i can be sure of is that the semicolon, perhaps even the comma, is unneeded: considering the rules of style i remember, sure, but also considering that last line's impact, separation by line should be enough.
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ice is ice ver 0.001 RN, CRNDLSM - by Erthona - 09-27-2016, 05:29 AM
RE: ice is ice - by RiverNotch - 09-29-2016, 01:33 AM
RE: ice is ice - by CRNDLSM - 01-17-2017, 09:58 AM
RE: ice is ice - by Erthona - 01-19-2017, 10:45 PM



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