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[nikkisto]

I really appreciated your tie into the other poets. I found it very clever. Your connection with different elements of poetry - smooth paper, words, lines, etc. - also created a very peaceful atmosphere in which I was able to see a poem right in front of me and connect each element to your feelings. I agree with the comment above in that I think your poem needed one more paragraph.

Thanks for the comment Abbs! I appreciate you taking the time, I think you're right and there's room at build on this. I'll sit with it a bit and see if I can work up a revision.