PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24

[rayheinrich]

Candy Glass
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Picked the major supporting actor in the video. 

Supporting? Considering the video's mise–en–scène, I'd say it
was the major actor. I really liked how you broke the frame (excuse pun)
by working an element of the special-effects into the narrative.

I actually loved the video (I'm very tolerant of, even enjoy, wretched
excess. Hard to do well.)

Good poem. - ray

P.S. One thing I'd cut in a second was the present-time subplot. It
breaks the continuity of the main plot and adds nothing (in my
opinion). And those actors (Ken and Barbie?), were marginal.
(Though I forgive them as they had such thankless roles to play).