PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24

[rayheinrich]

It was the sea ---
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Enjoyed... especially the formatting. I'm so used to people running amuck with
white-space punctuation; stuff that makes no logical or esthetic sense. It's
hard to use properly. Yours is consistent, logical, and really makes use of its
ability to provide multi-path narrative; 3-dimensional enjambment. (And it looks
beautiful on the page as well.) While E.E.Cummings was a master at it, he sometimes
screwed it up badly as well (my opinion). As someone who uses a subset of this sort of
punctuation extensively, I can really appreciate it. Well done. - Ray