PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23

[shemthepenman]

Code Processing A Pig

    I love this title: "Code Processing A Pig"; and I'm a sucker for biblical references.
And how much easier our lives would be, at least in dealing with certain religious people,
if it WAS scrumping that was the original sin.  In the Bible the tree of knowledge bears
sweet fruit, and the tree of life bears bitter.  When I first read that I thought "ha, gotcha";
but no... freedom of thought is some abomination or other, so… as always, we're supposed to suffer.

i like the title, as well. to be honest, i think it deserves a better poem... but, well, this is what it got, so. and as for biblical references, i wrote so many biblically inclined poems when i was a younger fellow, i feel like i can write them spinning on my cock.

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Scrumping is a great word. Your second stanza has a wonderful rhythmic quality. I reread it several times. Good stuff.


Code Processing A Pig

Thanks. and thanks for sharing. yours is my favourite. i can say that, right?