09-24-2016, 04:23 AM
Shem - I really like the 'back to the ...' repeats in your poem.
Ray - I started writing late, just 10 years ago. I think that's why I write so much now; a feeling that I need to catch up. Other writers my age have been working for a lot longer.
lizzie - great subversion of topic in your poem, was not expecting that!
C - Very Biblical-feeling scene, last two lines of the first stanza my favourite. I giggled at 'till' though - I think you meant 'tiller'
Q - You got right in to the mind of a Creator. I like the almost sheepish feeling here.
Ray - I started writing late, just 10 years ago. I think that's why I write so much now; a feeling that I need to catch up. Other writers my age have been working for a lot longer.
lizzie - great subversion of topic in your poem, was not expecting that!
C - Very Biblical-feeling scene, last two lines of the first stanza my favourite. I giggled at 'till' though - I think you meant 'tiller'
Q - You got right in to the mind of a Creator. I like the almost sheepish feeling here.