09-23-2016, 05:00 PM
(09-23-2016, 04:46 PM)just mercedes Wrote: she didn’t survive the operation
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You're such a damn hotdog! (Maybe that could explain your success with the last one?)
I was jealous when you wrote the Topic 1 poem in 2 hours and 23 minutes, but this one only took you 47 minutes!
Now if they were crappy poems it wouldn't bother me that much... but nooo.
Each level in this one is sublime.
These lines:
"darkness pushes softly against light
ready to plug any hole"
blew me away.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions