PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22
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(09-23-2016, 10:15 AM)HaleINthewind Wrote:  Well Just happened to have a fry poem lying around from this morning after reading the prompt and being to shy to post. So here goes

I Didn’t Want to be a Fry


When the world bloomed,
I waited,
swaddled in a dirt cocoon.
I made meal plans with earthworms.

My bare body split and open,
becoming one with sharp cheddar, scallion flecked.
I can see the drool pooling, from my black truffle, Parmesan, kisses,
lip licking.
A golden crusted Knight,
 a real ladies spud.

Now,
my golden dreams, held captive.
Restrained,
I wait in over salted shackles, under heat lamp,
festering.

Oh! Grubby mouths,
Please chomp me out of existence.
Well done, Smile I especially like the opening strophe and "a real ladies stud", does an apostrophe belong somewhere in ladies? Though I didn't notice it on the read.

It's a lovely, sad conclusion.
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PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by rayheinrich - 09-22-2016, 04:16 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-22-2016, 06:39 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-22-2016, 08:25 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Achebe - 09-23-2016, 06:14 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 06:19 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Lizzie - 09-24-2016, 08:56 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by billy - 09-23-2016, 06:53 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 02:17 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Lizzie - 09-23-2016, 10:05 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 06:36 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 06:58 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 07:18 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by kolemath - 09-23-2016, 07:19 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Lizzie - 09-23-2016, 07:27 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by kolemath - 09-23-2016, 07:42 AM
Food of Fast Gods - by dukealien - 09-23-2016, 07:43 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 10:01 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 10:28 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 10:54 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 11:09 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 11:15 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 11:45 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 11:49 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by billy - 09-23-2016, 11:56 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Leanne - 09-23-2016, 12:39 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Lizzie - 09-23-2016, 01:58 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by kolemath - 09-23-2016, 07:15 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Keith - 09-24-2016, 05:14 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-24-2016, 08:03 AM



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