09-23-2016, 10:28 AM
(09-23-2016, 10:15 AM)HaleINthewind Wrote: Well Just happened to have a fry poem lying around from this morning after reading the prompt and being to shy to post. So here goesWell done,
I Didn’t Want to be a Fry
When the world bloomed,
I waited,
swaddled in a dirt cocoon.
I made meal plans with earthworms.
My bare body split and open,
becoming one with sharp cheddar, scallion flecked.
I can see the drool pooling, from my black truffle, Parmesan, kisses,
lip licking.
A golden crusted Knight,
a real ladies spud.
Now,
my golden dreams, held captive.
Restrained,
I wait in over salted shackles, under heat lamp,
festering.
Oh! Grubby mouths,
Please chomp me out of existence.
I especially like the opening strophe and "a real ladies stud", does an apostrophe belong somewhere in ladies? Though I didn't notice it on the read. It's a lovely, sad conclusion.
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