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09-23-2016, 09:22 AM

(09-23-2016, 08:47 AM)Pdeathstar Wrote: Life's Tasting Notes

I'm nothing
but a French Fry in a Frosty.
Once warm and crisp
now cold and limping.

I'm rich but cheap - sickening but sweet

Drowning in everything
artificially refreshing.

Enjoyable and gross poem. Maybe I have an irrational disgust for limping fries. None the less this poem definatley made me loose my appetite. Especially for fast food- so for that I thank you!

P.s these poems are super fun. How long does this PWof thing go on for?

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PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by rayheinrich - 09-22-2016, 04:16 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-22-2016, 06:39 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-22-2016, 08:25 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Achebe - 09-23-2016, 06:14 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 06:19 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by cvanshelton - 09-23-2016, 03:21 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Quixilated - 09-22-2016, 11:24 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Lizzie - 09-24-2016, 08:56 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by QDeathstar - 09-23-2016, 12:28 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by billy - 09-23-2016, 06:53 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by shemthepenman - 09-23-2016, 01:48 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 02:17 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Lizzie - 09-23-2016, 10:05 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 06:36 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 06:58 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 07:18 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by kolemath - 09-23-2016, 07:19 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Lizzie - 09-23-2016, 07:27 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by rayheinrich - 09-27-2016, 05:44 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by kolemath - 09-23-2016, 07:42 AM

Food of Fast Gods - by dukealien - 09-23-2016, 07:43 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by QDeathstar - 09-23-2016, 08:47 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by HaleINthewind - 09-23-2016, 09:22 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 10:01 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by HaleINthewind - 09-23-2016, 10:15 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 10:28 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by RiverNotch - 09-23-2016, 10:54 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 10:54 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 11:09 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by RiverNotch - 09-23-2016, 11:10 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 11:15 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by RiverNotch - 09-23-2016, 11:26 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 11:45 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 11:49 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by UselessBlueprint - 09-23-2016, 11:55 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by billy - 09-23-2016, 11:56 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by HaleINthewind - 09-23-2016, 12:16 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Leanne - 09-23-2016, 12:39 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by cvanshelton - 09-23-2016, 12:39 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Lizzie - 09-23-2016, 01:58 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by HaleINthewind - 09-23-2016, 12:56 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by kolemath - 09-23-2016, 07:15 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by rayheinrich - 09-23-2016, 04:04 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by HaleINthewind - 09-23-2016, 10:29 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Keith - 09-24-2016, 05:14 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by HaleINthewind - 09-24-2016, 07:39 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-24-2016, 08:03 AM

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