Lovers’ Cliché

[Mr. Deadpool]

Hey total novice here but let me take a crack at a critique. I get the aim of the poem and the falling of love but at the same time I didnt feel connected to the author. To put plainly I feel like there could have been more deep rooted emotion instead of fancy words or phrases that mask it. Sometimes pretty words muddy the message. I appreciate you sharing and think your poem was good