09-21-2016, 02:17 PM
Terza rima sonnet? Your rhyme and meter all carefully presented, but still that third line is a real mouthful.
I'm not sure why the wooden boards, the careful walking, or the bars, are there. I'm missing something.
I enjoyed the read, though, thank you for posting this.
I'm not sure why the wooden boards, the careful walking, or the bars, are there. I'm missing something.
I enjoyed the read, though, thank you for posting this.