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Mind Your Business
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09-18-2016, 04:40 AM
You do very good descriptions. You caught me; I'm in my car looking away. This sounds like a beat poet giving angry social commentary about a stereotype. I really like how you say murmuring troll or father, because really, it could be. And the fact it's rush hour shows how many people are seeing the same thing. The title even drags me in, then slaps me in the face. Well done.
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Mind Your Business - by kolemath - 09-16-2016, 08:42 PM
RE: Mind Your Business - by Wjames - 09-17-2016, 05:49 PM
RE: Mind Your Business - by CRNDLSM - 09-18-2016, 04:40 AM
RE: Mind Your Business - by kolemath - 09-18-2016, 08:24 AM
RE: Mind Your Business - by heslopian - 09-20-2016, 10:06 AM
RE: Mind Your Business - by Sparkydashforth - 12-04-2016, 02:28 AM
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