Upgrades
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I think this is a great intro. You say a lot in very little and that's a great quality. But it feels like a setup to the rest of the story.
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Upgrades - by Wjames - 09-17-2016, 06:35 PM
RE: Upgrades - by CRNDLSM - 09-18-2016, 04:28 AM
RE: Upgrades - by heslopian - 09-20-2016, 10:09 AM
RE: Upgrades - by kolemath - 09-22-2016, 01:00 AM
RE: Upgrades - by Wjames - 09-22-2016, 06:04 PM
RE: Upgrades - by crimsonqueen - 09-23-2016, 03:46 AM



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