09-13-2016, 12:14 AM
I love reading those two together, btw, though it never happened upon me to fuse them. I found them so alike as I read them, but I think much of my enjoyment came from how different, ultimately how separate, they were, Walt with his steamy sex and overlong lines, Emily with her chaste fire and meticulously constructed houses of cards. But this fusion --- Walt seems to emphasize Emily's crazy hotsies, while Emily seems to actually make Walt truly transcendental. All the love!
Needs a bit of polish, though, in terms of the tenses and commas and shit, though that would make this less of a readymade. The styles of the two are already a little heavy, Emily's even moreso, so that at parts of this fusion, things become a grind. Still, all the love, all the love!
Needs a bit of polish, though, in terms of the tenses and commas and shit, though that would make this less of a readymade. The styles of the two are already a little heavy, Emily's even moreso, so that at parts of this fusion, things become a grind. Still, all the love, all the love!