09-05-2016, 12:54 AM
(04-01-2016, 11:47 AM)Wjames Wrote: The plum farm was struggling
since it’s plumbing had burst.
Old man johnson was sour
but was not well rehearsed,
like a plum that’s still green
or a poet's first verse;
he resolved to expunge
all the plums from the earth.
I love the consistent double meanings
It's very balanced and well written, but why isn't Johnson capitalized?Thanks for the read!

