Plum Sauce
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(04-01-2016, 11:47 AM)Wjames Wrote:  The plum farm was struggling
since it’s plumbing had burst.
Old man johnson was sour
but was not well rehearsed,
like a plum that’s still green
or a poet's first verse;
he resolved to expunge
all the plums from the earth.

I love the consistent double meanings Big Grin It's very balanced and well written, but why isn't Johnson capitalized?
Thanks for the read!
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Plum Sauce - by Wjames - 04-01-2016, 11:47 AM
RE: Plum Sauce - by cidermaid - 04-02-2016, 06:05 PM
RE: Plum Sauce - by Erthona - 04-06-2016, 02:58 AM
RE: Plum Sauce - by milo - 04-06-2016, 04:11 AM
RE: Plum Sauce - by heslopian - 04-07-2016, 01:56 AM
RE: Plum Sauce - by Wjames - 04-07-2016, 03:08 AM
RE: Plum Sauce - by RiverNotch - 04-07-2016, 07:04 PM
RE: Plum Sauce - by Bunx - 04-07-2016, 02:08 PM
RE: Plum Sauce - by Southern Scarab - 09-05-2016, 12:54 AM



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