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One Way to End an Affair
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09-04-2016, 11:28 AM
I like the mysterious atmosphere of the piece however I did not like how the writer TOLD US how to view it. In example with all things being like candles, sort of sounds corny, like "life is like a box of chocolates" It seems done before and too telling.
Maybe make it more specific. "Is this touch like a candle, or a heavy stone?" |
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One Way to End an Affair - by 71degrees - 09-03-2016, 11:07 AM
RE: One Way to End an Affair - by Achebe - 09-03-2016, 06:30 PM
RE: One Way to End an Affair - by Lizzie - 09-03-2016, 06:44 PM
RE: One Way to End an Affair - by Brownlie - 09-04-2016, 07:59 AM
RE: One Way to End an Affair - by D.MYST - 09-04-2016, 11:28 AM
RE: One Way to End an Affair - by ellajam - 09-04-2016, 10:15 PM
RE: One Way to End an Affair - by 71degrees - 09-05-2016, 12:30 AM
RE: One Way to End an Affair - by Vox_Nihilis - 09-11-2016, 02:23 PM
RE: One Way to End an Affair - by 71degrees - 09-12-2016, 11:01 PM
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