09-01-2016, 03:31 PM
So, hey makeshift....I'm sorry to say I didn't really get into this one. Sometimes I think poetry is like fashion, and no matter how nice it is, I just don't want to buy what you're selling.
I have a nine year old boy ...and words like snot, nostril and 'licking noses' are too...eew for me. (Not that I only like unicorn and puppy poems...)
it doesn't mean someone else won't want to buy it. And, it didn't bore me, that's always good.
Gotta say, though, I really liked your other poem, Peter Pan......(-:
I have a nine year old boy ...and words like snot, nostril and 'licking noses' are too...eew for me. (Not that I only like unicorn and puppy poems...)
it doesn't mean someone else won't want to buy it. And, it didn't bore me, that's always good.
Gotta say, though, I really liked your other poem, Peter Pan......(-:
"Why do you suppose we only feel compelled to chase the ones who run away?" -Vicomte de Valmont, Dangerous Liasons