Corroboree

[HopeVictoria56]

Corroboree

<> petrichor glance
moves flux dead ochre in 
torrent whites
descended
spates turned flights
to find calloused paw.
should hurt rose quartz crevices
cleft initials 
in veined streams
for now ardent soil?
where conflict lead oil drops
to confines, 
to break Memnon
wave rocks.
no, spoke fractures of
clay.

We meet, sacred,
to the occident-red, 
severed tree
sentenced,
to breath free.

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