08-31-2016, 01:43 PM
This poem sounds like a professional wrestler in the early 1990s with generic mike skills. There's nothing wrong with mixing myths, the world is a mixed myth, there's no mix, just the same. You're abolishing it all anyway. It seems all a setup for the last line, which is very good but seems familiar. So either it's a great line or an unoriginal one. I guess it depends on what you've read.