Two birds
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I wanted to try something new. I want your opinions on what you thought of the poem, your first thoughts and etc.. thanks


Two birds sat in a nest
together
Side by side
Arm and arm
Everyday
Strong connection

nothing but self pride
and immaturity would break
them apart

slowly but surely they distanced
two birds whom were best friends
same birds, just in different bodies

one day one bird stopped living in
reality
she stopped flying
stopped caring

the other bird problems
tossed out the
nest
left out
and
betrayed

months and months
the bird sat only
confused
but
hurt

she wandered what
went wrong how could
you be unbreakable to
not being able to look
one another in the eye

but on a lonely cold day
she found a new bird to sit with her
in the nest

now the other bird
just wishes that
she didn’t take the
other bird
for granted or hurt her

because now I
am the bird who is hurt
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Messages In This Thread
Two birds - by Loveblind - 04-22-2010, 04:28 AM
RE: Two birds - by billy - 04-22-2010, 06:34 AM
RE: Two birds - by addy - 04-22-2010, 07:59 AM
RE: Two birds - by billy - 04-22-2010, 08:37 AM



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