08-31-2016, 08:28 AM
I don't remember it from NaPoMo - can't remember reading it before - maybe I did, and I hid that from myself because I was so impressed, with a 'wish I'd written that' feeling. I love the interplay of voices and scenes, weaving through time and place up to the God parade. Then your last four lines. Or even just the last one. Well done.
