Threshold
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Thank you artjewl for the input...I really appreciate it. I also like the last bit the best and I see the most problems in the first/ start...I will try reworking with your recommends

"Why do you suppose we only feel compelled to chase the ones who run away?" -Vicomte de Valmont, Dangerous Liasons
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Threshold - by Vanity - 08-30-2016, 09:47 AM
RE: Threshold - by artjewl - 08-30-2016, 12:20 PM
RE: Threshold - by Vanity - 08-30-2016, 04:56 PM
RE: Threshold - by makeshift - 09-02-2016, 01:27 AM
RE: Threshold - by LunaDeLore - 09-02-2016, 11:16 AM



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