08-30-2016, 09:12 AM
(08-29-2016, 07:08 AM)makeshift Wrote: Are windows solid?Anyone who can write about snot and congestion and make it interesting is okay with me
Drop, glass--
drip like snot
out a curry nostril.
Sag on your weight--don’t shatter.
Could heads be shaped
like greenhouses
instead of hallways?
We know to break space
is to sprint,
to fill it--to speak,
but to navigate?
The passage lengthens;
my lips unknown.
the silence is war
drums tapped by
a thought:
I wanna slip my tongue up your nose.
You know, curry is so spicy (to some) that it brings the acuteness of this to a sharpness. When I whiff a "hot" spice, my nose ruffles and I almost always sneeze. I'm not really sure what's happening but the fact you want to lick that nose is enough for me to visualize a scene, even if it might be gross and disgusting.
I like this, but I don't. It's making me guess too much.

