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I AM (K)OROT (explicit)
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08-29-2016, 07:11 PM
You've managed to give your poem a flowing narrative and the chaotic construction of each individual part does well to paint a portait of insanity.The words atoms and zombies seem a bit unfitting to the rest of the work though - a bit too modern in the midst of such classical constructions.
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I AM (K)OROT (explicit) - by SethFiction - 08-29-2016, 07:59 AM
RE: I AM (K)OROT (explicit) - by surrealHead - 08-29-2016, 07:11 PM
RE: I AM (K)OROT (explicit) - by Bellahina - 08-30-2016, 03:23 PM
RE: I AM (K)OROT (explicit) - by HopeVictoria56 - 09-01-2016, 01:58 AM
RE: I AM (K)OROT (explicit) - by SethFiction - 09-02-2016, 03:07 AM
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