Congested, a New Intimacy
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(08-29-2016, 07:08 AM)makeshift Wrote:  Are windows solid?
Drop, glass--
drip like snot  Are you saying "drip" because glass is an amorphous solid that does tend to "flow" after a really long period of time?
out a curry nostril.   This sounds vaguely racist but I'm sure you meant something else by this.  Do you mean like what happens to your nose after you eat something spicy?
Sag on your weight--don’t shatter.

Could heads be shaped
like greenhouses
instead of hallways?  Aren't they kind of already more greenhouse-shaped than hallway-shaped?

We know to break space
is to sprint,
to fill it--to speak,
but to navigate?  To explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and new civilizations, to boldly go where no man has gone before

The passage lengthens;
my lips unknown.
the silence is war
drums tapped by
a thought:
I wanna slip my tongue up your nose.  Why though?
...okay so honestly, I'm not entirely sure what this poem is about, but it sounds like something that I wish I could turn into a living experience while drunk, because that'd be amazingly fun.
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Congested, a New Intimacy - by makeshift - 08-29-2016, 07:08 AM
RE: Congested, a New Intimacy - by SnarlingThroughOurSmiles - 08-29-2016, 12:09 PM
RE: Congested, a New Intimacy - by CRNDLSM - 08-30-2016, 04:39 AM
RE: Congested, a New Intimacy - by 71degrees - 08-30-2016, 09:12 AM
RE: Congested, a New Intimacy - by makeshift - 09-01-2016, 12:21 PM
RE: Congested, a New Intimacy - by Vanity - 09-01-2016, 03:31 PM



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