08-28-2016, 10:14 PM
August (Haiku)
Edit 2
Ironweed dust-mauve;
turquoise beaded dragonfly
stutters seeking lake.
Edit 1
ironweed dry mauve
turquoise beaded dragonfly
stutters seeking lake
original version;
driftwood gutter beached
turquoise beaded dragonfly
stutters seeking lake
(Trying again.
Haiku hard for unworthy
wordy person.)
Edit 2
Ironweed dust-mauve;
turquoise beaded dragonfly
stutters seeking lake.
Edit 1
ironweed dry mauve
turquoise beaded dragonfly
stutters seeking lake
original version;
driftwood gutter beached
turquoise beaded dragonfly
stutters seeking lake
(Trying again.
Haiku hard for unworthy
wordy person.)
Non-practicing atheist