The Watch Man -- version 1.1

[Lizzie]

In this version, I tried to preserve as much of everyone's excellent advice as I could. I decided to put the formatting back into a more symmetrical presentation, because I felt like the reading had become choppy. Also, I felt like The Watch Man would want it this way -- consistent, linear.

REW: I put the legal pads back in for ya 

Thanks for everyone that took the time to comment. Love ya Pigpen! >< >< ><