Parted (Edit #1)

Parted (Edit #1)

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#11

08-26-2016, 11:17 PM

Perhaps work on the "King" theme a bit more, and dive into the complexities of what it means to be a king in relation to having a relationship. I think your themes are a bit muddled and vague and could use some more vivid imagery.

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Parted (Edit #1) - by UselessBlueprint - 05-03-2016, 10:13 AM

RE: Parted - by Achebe - 05-03-2016, 06:02 PM

RE: Parted - by ellajam - 05-03-2016, 07:27 PM

RE: Parted - by dukealien - 05-04-2016, 10:53 AM

RE: Parted (Edit #1) - by UselessBlueprint - 05-04-2016, 12:02 PM

RE: Parted (Edit #1) - by Lizzie - 08-19-2016, 07:58 AM

RE: Parted (Edit #1) - by UselessBlueprint - 08-19-2016, 11:38 AM

RE: Parted (Edit #1) - by cvanshelton - 08-20-2016, 11:27 AM

RE: Parted (Edit #1) - by UselessBlueprint - 08-21-2016, 01:29 PM

RE: Parted (Edit #1) - by stampede331 - 08-26-2016, 03:55 PM

RE: Parted (Edit #1) - by SethFiction - 08-26-2016, 11:17 PM

RE: Parted (Edit #1) - by nikkisto - 08-27-2016, 07:48 PM

RE: Parted (Edit #1) - by djNasty - 08-31-2016, 06:48 AM

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