08-25-2016, 06:12 AM
Hey Kolmath,
I enjoyed this one as a fan of Larkin, I just wish it were a bit longer and more observational in tone as that was his style. He was as one sitting back and sullenly reflecting on life all around him. Again though, as Leanne said very nice. As an aside I have never seen a crotch less coat lol
I enjoyed this one as a fan of Larkin, I just wish it were a bit longer and more observational in tone as that was his style. He was as one sitting back and sullenly reflecting on life all around him. Again though, as Leanne said very nice. As an aside I have never seen a crotch less coat lol
(08-12-2016, 02:50 AM)kolemath Wrote: THIS BE THE OTHER VERSE
I understand the filthy hands
that spelled you damned, Mr. Larkin.
This grand fuck up called childhood
in double sided crotchless winter coats.
But young death warms no new ways.
Dress your children differently to set a better pace.
Someday the Mystery will be known 