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Four Years Old

Four Years Old
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08-24-2016, 03:21 PM
(08-24-2016, 03:16 PM)eric_never Wrote:  Yes, sorry, the line-space between stanzas in Edit 1 Thumbsup
Gotcha. Yeah, I took the spaces out on edit 2 because it was sparse enough that I couldn't really justify breaking it up. But, if I go back to edit 1 (in whole or in part), those will return.

Thanks for the input! Big Grin
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Messages In This Thread
Four Years Old - by Lizzie - 06-20-2016, 04:23 PM
RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by just mercedes - 07-08-2016, 10:48 AM
RE: Four Years Old - by Lizzie - 03-25-2017, 06:41 AM
RE: Four Years Old - by CarrieChristo - 03-31-2017, 01:21 PM
RE: Four Years Old - by Lizzie - 04-03-2017, 05:46 AM
RE: Four Years Old - by Todd - 03-31-2017, 02:37 PM
RE: Four Years Old - by Lizzie - 04-03-2017, 07:09 AM
RE: Four Years Old - by CRNDLSM - 04-03-2017, 02:20 AM
RE: Four Years Old - by QDeathstar - 04-03-2017, 06:06 AM



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