loaf on a box

loaf on a box

justlikeyou
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08-20-2016, 06:05 AM

A very fun image :-) Is this meant to be a haiku or just a short poem? If a haiku, then I would say that it sounds closer to a run on sentence than a haiku with separate fragment and phrase to my ears. If just a short poem, ignore this completely :-)

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loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-16-2016, 05:51 AM

RE: loaf on a box - by just mercedes - 08-16-2016, 07:57 AM

RE: loaf on a box - by RiverNotch - 08-16-2016, 12:05 PM

RE: loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-16-2016, 03:00 PM

RE: loaf on a box - by billy - 08-16-2016, 04:51 PM

RE: loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-17-2016, 04:51 AM

RE: loaf on a box - by UselessBlueprint - 08-17-2016, 12:08 PM

RE: loaf on a box - by ellajam - 08-17-2016, 06:31 AM

RE: loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-17-2016, 11:00 AM

RE: loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-18-2016, 03:18 AM

RE: loaf on a box - by Lizzie - 08-18-2016, 12:28 PM

RE: loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-18-2016, 03:11 PM

RE: loaf on a box - by justlikeyou - 08-20-2016, 06:05 AM

RE: loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-20-2016, 11:29 AM

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