08-15-2016, 05:29 PM
Another beautiful song - love it.
If I can make a couple of suggestions:
1. You might try pausing for a couple of beats before the last line of each stanza. Creates a nice little moment of anticipation.
2. Perhaps you might try a variation in S2 - at the moment it's 3 rather similar stanzas.
If I can make a couple of suggestions:
1. You might try pausing for a couple of beats before the last line of each stanza. Creates a nice little moment of anticipation.
2. Perhaps you might try a variation in S2 - at the moment it's 3 rather similar stanzas.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe