Vote for Trump, American or not
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(08-14-2016, 06:59 PM)lizziep Wrote:  I like the exact rhymes at the ends of many of your line and how the poem starts out with 3 again's and recapitulates the three again toward the end. Gives a great sense of closure to it.

And, very funny  Hysterical I want to share it with my friends, but that's against the rules.

Alas, it's all fun and games until November arrives. We shall see.
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~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Messages In This Thread
Vote for Trump, American or not - by Achebe - 08-13-2016, 09:16 AM
RE: Vote for Trump, American or not - by Lizzie - 08-14-2016, 06:59 PM
RE: Vote for Trump, American or not - by Achebe - 08-14-2016, 09:34 PM
RE: Vote for Trump, American or not - by Leanne - 08-15-2016, 05:42 AM
RE: Vote for Trump, American or not - by Erthona - 08-15-2016, 06:24 AM
RE: Vote for Trump, American or not - by Lizzie - 08-20-2016, 11:37 AM
RE: Vote for Trump, American or not - by billy - 08-15-2016, 05:32 PM
RE: Vote for Trump, American or not - by Achebe - 08-17-2016, 09:00 PM



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