He Said Six Months
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I like that the poet breaks many rules stylistically. The beginning is very strong and well done! I agree that the wolf and lamb bit is overdone but the other parts come together well in herky-jerky way. I am very curious to know what the title is about!
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He Said Six Months - by RiverNotch - 08-02-2016, 11:16 PM
RE: He Said Six Months - by kolemath - 08-04-2016, 08:31 AM
RE: He Said Six Months - by QDeathstar - 08-04-2016, 11:20 AM
RE: He Said Six Months - by comandoartjunky - 08-13-2016, 01:47 AM
RE: He Said Six Months - by PenandPaper - 08-13-2016, 06:24 AM
RE: He Said Six Months - by RiverNotch - 08-16-2016, 11:41 AM
RE: He Said Six Months - by Tiptoethroughthetulips - 08-24-2016, 01:20 AM



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