08-11-2016, 04:25 AM
Thanks so much for the feedback guys. The poem is *supposed* to be about the magical effect of eye contact, but I obviously did not convey this at all haha.
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Eyes Swear (Edit 1) - by gmc - 08-10-2016, 04:01 PM
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RE: Eyes Swear - by billy - 08-10-2016, 06:26 PM
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RE: Eyes Swear (Edit 1) - by SethFiction - 08-27-2016, 02:08 AM
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