08-10-2016, 01:06 AM
Poet-rice,
Yes, thank you very much. The repetition needs to go, also the "really", I will take care of those in the next edit. Very helpful critique.
Thanks again,
dale
Yes, thank you very much. The repetition needs to go, also the "really", I will take care of those in the next edit. Very helpful critique.
Thanks again,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.