Echo

[maximuswolf]

It has a feel of common terms trying to make a simple concept a complex theme.  The 3rd line doesn't work for me, maybe switch some of the words.  Find it strains me to grasp your intent, Sometimes even switching sentences around helps me....as such, starting off with the question.


Say., in every shell living a soul?
Nay, there's nothing but an echo.
Laying bare on moonlit water,
Swaying with gentle breeze