To An Addict (edit shem, JDofing)

[GordonBillett]

Hello, I'm new to critiquing but I'm very eager to speak on this, on a personal level. I think you've tapped in to an excellent topic; it's universal, yet also very personal through your voice, which what I think makes good poetry. I feel very attuned to your perspective!
My only suggestion is to use "adorn" rather than "supply", since it's in the context of a necklace and all. But I really enjoyed the emotion in your piece, and I'm eager to see it take full form!
cheers!