08-05-2016, 10:06 AM
Hi! I love the concept, as others have said. My favorite Pink Floyd Song is "Echoes" so I personally revel in this theme.
As far as modifications go, I'd say that "Say, in every shell a living soul?" might have a bit more pace and rhythm to it as opposed to "Say, in every shell living a soul?" I also feel that it attacks the intuitively-understood concept of our souls inhabiting a corporeal body.
Just a suggestion though. Thank you for sharing!
As far as modifications go, I'd say that "Say, in every shell a living soul?" might have a bit more pace and rhythm to it as opposed to "Say, in every shell living a soul?" I also feel that it attacks the intuitively-understood concept of our souls inhabiting a corporeal body.
Just a suggestion though. Thank you for sharing!