08-01-2016, 06:54 AM
(06-03-2016, 01:39 PM)PoetCraft Wrote: Revised.Hi, PoetCraft!
Echo
Laying bare on moonlit water,
Swaying with gentle breeze.
Say, in every shell living a soul?
Nay, there's nothing but an echo.
Excellent poem... however, I must say that it seems to me a couple of the words in the third line should be transposed, to read something like "Say, in every shell A LIVING soul?". Just my two cents. Otherwise, I really enjoyed reading it!

