A Timely Passing

[RiverNotch]

@lizziep: not quite getting what you meant on "final". i've also ended up agreeing that what she saw before is unclear, and she probably won't get it, either -- starting to think of gutting it. also, i'll keep that note in mind, hehe.

You have finall and I assumed that you has misspelled finally or final. I'm starting to think it might be a noun I'm not familiar with.

massive whoops. didn't notice that even when reading yer crit, dang. gonna stealth edit -- should be finally.

and thanks for the crit, Achebe. i'll remove the the in fire ants -- not yet sure about the suha fruit, since for me it demarcates the whole metaphor more clearly.

also stealth edited: never knew the proper spelling was dragon fruit, not dragonfruit. so so.