A Timely Passing
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a joy to read, especially S2.
I think dropping the second 'the' improves the lines below:
"the foundations the suha fruit,"
"the nests of the fire ants"
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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A Timely Passing - by RiverNotch - 07-28-2016, 02:05 AM
RE: A Timely Passing - by QDeathstar - 07-28-2016, 02:38 AM
RE: A Timely Passing - by Lizzie - 07-28-2016, 04:05 AM
RE: A Timely Passing - by kolemath - 07-28-2016, 07:26 AM
RE: A Timely Passing - by RiverNotch - 07-29-2016, 01:55 AM
RE: A Timely Passing - by Lizzie - 07-29-2016, 02:40 AM
RE: A Timely Passing - by RiverNotch - 07-29-2016, 12:38 PM
RE: A Timely Passing - by Achebe - 07-29-2016, 10:27 AM
RE: A Timely Passing - by bluegypsea - 08-01-2016, 02:27 AM



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