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lifespan (EDIT 1) lifesize
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07-25-2016, 06:56 AM
Thanks for the close reads everyone. @todd: i've tried to be more consistent with the narrator's voice. @cvan: thanks for the bookend idea and your detailed comments. @RN: I'm blown away by your depth of reading. thanks for helping me see the important points of a lifelong narrative arc. i'm not sure my revision does you comments justice. @robert: thanks for your comments, as I considered them in revision.
Thanks to this Forum
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lifespan (EDIT 1) lifesize - by kolemath - 07-19-2016, 05:06 PM
RE: lifespan - by Todd - 07-19-2016, 10:53 PM
RE: lifespan - by kolemath - 07-20-2016, 09:36 AM
RE: lifespan - by cvanshelton - 07-20-2016, 01:37 PM
RE: lifespan - by Todd - 07-20-2016, 07:33 PM
RE: lifespan - by Achebe - 07-20-2016, 07:48 PM
RE: lifespan - by RiverNotch - 07-21-2016, 12:28 AM
RE: lifespan - by Robert - 07-22-2016, 11:09 PM
RE: lifespan (EDIT 1) lifesize - by kolemath - 07-25-2016, 06:56 AM
RE: lifespan (EDIT 1) lifesize - by Lizzie - 07-26-2016, 07:29 PM
RE: lifespan (EDIT 1) lifesize - by RiverNotch - 07-27-2016, 01:47 AM
RE: lifespan (EDIT 1) lifesize - by Todd - 07-27-2016, 05:17 AM
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